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HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:51:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Along a coastal forest of Brazil
Violin trees are being cut down for money,
until they are nearly nil.
They are so special, for no other
material will suffice....
To make a lovely harmonic violin,
or it's bow so concise!
A woman's body can be compared
to the expensive Stradivarius.
The slightest touch, or caress,
sets off a musical wondrous.
Like the fragile violin, she must
be tuned each day.
Praise, tenderness, kindness,
love's gentle bouquet.
Her heart and soul revolve around
her loving husband.
In him she places her trust,
and by him she is strengthened.
She is his emotional compliment.
Her happiness depends entirely
on his treatment.
Men have no need to converse,
but a woman needs to be heard.
Like the violin, words are her music succored
The bow on the violin can be sweet or sour.
Likewise, a woman's heart and soul,
when praised devour.
If a loving husband can love
her as his own body.
Her happy heart will rejoice comely.
A hug for reassurance, like a violin
caressed by the bow.
Her soul is filled with love's tempo
a passionate crescendo.
If a Stradivarius so valuable and delicate
is played while out of tune.
It's lovely melodic music is ruined,
and soon immune.
A woman, a sensitive violin
played tenderly fine....
Will reward a bow with
an abundance of symphonies divine.
Created by
CheriCamLeBren
February 7, 2004
"A woman is not loved because
she is beautiful, nor is the violin
loved because of it's beauty.
A violin is beautiful because
of it's beautiful music,
and a woman is beautiful
because she is loved."
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2004-02-07 18:51:03]
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:58:07 PM AEST
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| I wonder why more men don't learn to play? Or at least to fiddle around..... |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by emystar on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:59:12 PM AEST
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Wow, this is definently a masterpeice!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:04:04 PM AEST
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(Still laughing for the comment of a_bear) Wow this poem is beautiful! What an amazing metaphor, this poem is full of great description and has a certain sound in it. Loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:08:59 PM AEST
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"Men have no need to converse,
but a woman needs to be heard"
I don't agree with that, so even though I'm a woman, I'll stand up for the male species here.... men need to be heard and loved just as much as a woman does.
beautiful write though... couldn't pass it up given my name... hehe
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:53:03 PM AEST
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"Violin trees"!? i'll take that as poetic soul lol, my great great uncle was dvorak from prague, my family made violins, he was in the orchestra, anyway, i absolutely love this poem, it is breathtakingly stunning!!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by Jazz on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:12:25 PM AEST
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Ah, such an amazing piece of work. You have put into wors, the things that woman yearn for, that men seem to have lost in this day in age. I am a woman, and I must say that we are beautiful creatures, no matter what we look like on the outside. I wish everyone thought this way...
Again, amazing work! Please, keep it up!
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:26:51 PM AEST
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Omg Omg Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!What a LOVELY poem!Thank you so much!You put love and the beauty of a violin in it,this poem can't be anymore beautiful!If you only knew how a stradivarius violin sounds,which I bet you do!It's so damn beautiful!awwwwwwwwww!And yes,a woman is like a violin,only the best one(stradivarius as you said)I agree!You have really made my day,I play the violin and well this is EXACTLY the type of poem I wanted to read!Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PumpkinPie who's happy as hell |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:30:14 PM AEST
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| By the way,I'm referring your poem to everyone here,it was just so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by Kie on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:47:01 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful beyond words. A very powerful poem that all men should read daily. Loved this one alot. Kie |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by lonesomerose on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST
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so very true this is wonderful job on this masterpiece conni sou
michelle |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by lonesomerose on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:25:22 AM AEST
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so very true this is wonderful job on this masterpiece connisue
michelle |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by norm on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:11:46 PM AEST
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To the Ctitters Lady::A marvelous rendition of sense and compassion
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Everything you say is right and true
Say to no one..between me and you,
I'm musically deal and cannot hear,
The scratching on a fiddle, dear.
A cello may be otherwise
This is so..a few of us guys
Would rather have a bigger hold,
Just my thoughts..may I be bold...
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by Ren on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 05:39:02 PM AEST
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wow. just... wow.
thankyou. |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by Eriskay on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 06:15:16 PM AEST
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I have to say that as a woman I very much appreciate the sentiment of this poem. I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that I'm not totally convinced that a woman's happiness depends entirely on her husband's treatment of her, but there is no question that it matters a great deal! :) As for the musical aspects of your composition, I must say it is a nice comparison: the violin to a woman's body. But having played a strad myself, I must point out that it is more than love which makes the music so beautiful, it is also skill....
Nice work. :)
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:11:27 AM AEST
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| You played a stradivarius?You do know that there's only 600 in the whole universe right???! |
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Re: HOW TO LOVE A WOMAN
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:12:15 AM AEST
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| that comment was actually for eriksky.. |
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