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My brother My Hero

Contributed by Justice3310 on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 06:33:33 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Most people choose their Heros to be famous or those of misbelief,
but in my case my hero is one who dealt with alot of grief
All his life he struggled to make it bye,
all his life he did more then just try
Tryin so hard to just make his Dad smile,
workin so hard takin the extra mile
Makin descions he would regret in the end,
tryin so hard just become his Dad's friend
Never realizin how proud he should of been,
just by the goodness he had within
I tried so hard to do the things he did,
I still do although im no longer a kid
I wish i could take away the saddness in his bleeding heart,
I wish i could of been there before the pain ripped him apart
Although hes not perfect he has always be in my bright light,
With one word he always made things seem alright
Although he doesnt know it i have always been proud to say,
that he is my hero and no one could take that away
My dear brother please open your eyes and see,
that no matter how hard things get you'll always have me
I will never leave your side no matter what you decide,
just take the time to think and pray dont ever let him leave your side
I will be here for you through the good and the bad,
I promise you this you could never make me mad
I love you for bein you,
I love you for the silly things you do
You are my brother, my hero and my best friend,
This will last forever my love wont end

Copyright © Justice3310 ... [ 2002-09-06 06:33:33]
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Re: My brother My Hero (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 06:38:24 AM AEST
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What an expression of love! Cherish all moments,

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