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silent witness
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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but no one listens to the sound of an empty smile
though at times it says so much
theres nothing there
its just a stare?
i cant keep this up
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ZooYork_Chick
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Re: silent witness
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:33:34 PM AEST
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"but no one listens to the sound of an empty smile" excellent line, well in accordance with your title, once again a complete thought flow, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: silent witness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:36:54 PM AEST
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Well...you had better keep up the posting of poems... Another good write..
Jenni |
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Re: silent witness
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:50:47 PM AEST
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| Yeah, nothing behind the eyes...lips grinning but the eyes saying nothing...I know what you mean...It's hard to keep the lips up there huh? Great discription! |
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