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Suffer the consequencesThankless death

Contributed by AbstractMinded on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:29:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

There is a night that sleeps through day.
The time it goes tight in a touch of wind.
That old countess, she is shouting in.
Getting underheard, as her mind it drifts
To the night that she saw winding through the day.

The girl you love with her feelings unfair
Screams with her breath through the faceless air.
Her green eyes sparkle once last.
With the light flowing in
And her world finished up, forever.

Sad forever; with your tears flooding through my mind.

Dont be shown the way to love my world.
Dont be known to always see me in this light.
Cos im watching your fate
And Im waiting for mine
But nothing ever came.

I feel unheard so I make my shame;
This night will go wild as I start my game
They will finally know me.
With my life in your hands,
And the barrel looking down on me.

Dream lover, with my words flowing
Through your mind for never.

Asleep, on the ground, with the
Earth falling down on my dreams.

Copyright © AbstractMinded ... [ 2004-02-07 15:29:00]
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Re: Suffer the consequencesThankless death (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:41:11 PM AEST
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What a poem! Had to read it twice, Same conclusions, the title is really appropriate! Great write!
Anne :D

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