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Good-bye to the thorn in my Side
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:40:07 PM in AEST
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Messenger of pain
Flee from Me
Follow the river to the sea
There you will find a boat
And with a hundred stones
Wrapped round your throat
You wil fall from the ship
And as you drown all alone
So will the thorn that pierced my hip
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Re: Good-bye to the thorn in my Side
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by Merry on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:43:32 PM AEST
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A very angry and bitter write - I like it, seems that is a frame of reference I can relate to .
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Re: Good-bye to the thorn in my Side
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by norticus on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:47:20 PM AEST
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I hate thorns in my hips. I expect there is some deep meaning here. I liked it and that's that.
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Re: Good-bye to the thorn in my Side
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by desertwispers on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 04:05:36 AM AEST
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| powerful energy in this poem |
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Re: Good-bye to the thorn in my Side
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:44:12 PM AEST
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| Echoes of anger and I really liked this one alot! Kie |
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