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Seeing The Light No More
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:12:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Seeing The Light No More
I shudder
As the freezing rain blows harshly into my eyes.
Breathing deeply
I watch as my future gradually begins to change,
Right before my eyes.
I am left, unable to help,
To help what I wish it would have become.
Instead,
I am left,
Alone, cold and naked.
Surrounded by thousands of people,
Each left unchanged by me,
I have become invisible,
Nothing more than anonymous.
If only I could have stopped the light,
Just kept it with me for one more day.
Darkness begins to take over,
I am to weak to fight it any longer.
A single tear falls from my eye
Why did you have to leave me,
Where did I go wrong?
Is there any way I can fix,
What I have allready done wrong?
And fix what I might do in the future?
Or is the last time I will see the light?
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2004-02-07 14:12:28]
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Re: Seeing The Light No More
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:05:21 PM AEST
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Are you sure she hasn't already left you!!!! Cuz this sounded so real.... Great write...
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Re: Seeing The Light No More
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:09:17 PM AEST
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Me again....what I meant to say was that you have written this very well..... you have a very vivid imagination...
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Re: Seeing The Light No More
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by evryrose on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:03:27 PM AEST
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| wow....babe, as long as I can I will remain with you...I love you and I would never want you to feel like that for real ;-) |
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