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Diary Of A Soldier Part II
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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The clock goes off about a quarter to two, when will I be back, I haven't a clue,
Cammo up, secure my gear, stay focussed attempt to block out the fear,
Will I return I don't know, I feel so alone trying to fend off the cold,
This is the life in which I lead, for America I will bleed,
The mission unknown, but the body count keeps growing,
Will I be next, I cup my hands around this lighter to light my cigarette,
Out here I feel so alone, it's like I'm separated from the world, man I miss home,
It's cold and dark, it feels so empty here in my heart,
Frozen with a thousand mile stare, nothing in site but sand and air,
The sun breaks and I'm left to anticipate,
What could be waiting over that dune, is it the end, is it my doom,
Closer and closer comes the dune, praying and praying I don't hear a boom,
Deep inside I know it's time,
Around the dune we go, oh my God, heavens no.................
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2004-02-07 13:53:53]
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part II
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:58:40 PM AEST
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Another heart felt poem, Matt....
This is really very good.
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part II
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:09:20 PM AEST
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touching write matt be safe and bless you.
michelle |
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part II
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:54:44 PM AEST
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| So touching ! We all will keep you in our thoughts! Christina |
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part II
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:31:08 AM AEST
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These lines are breath taking:
Frozen with a thousand mile stare, nothing in site but sand and air,
The sun breaks and I'm left to anticipate,
What could be waiting over that dune, is it the end, is it my doom"..
well done my friend.. venkat |
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