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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:02:34 PM in AEST
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soft touches
warm breath
gentle smiles
slipping right through my hands
this was your love
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forever lasted longer than i thought
and shorter than i hoped
you moved faster than my words
spilling out my lips
flowing over my mind
panic in my soul
as i saw you
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i never had you
you were always a dream
that i have lost
i open my eyes
then close
begging you to reappear
pull the sheets around me
love me
i've lapsed
and im not coming home
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Re: lapse
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:23:10 PM AEST
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| ooo, this is good... it definitely creates significance... Welcome to YPDC!! |
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Re: lapse
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:16:38 PM AEST
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Ohh i like this one! Amazing writing! Really good!
Anne :D |
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Re: lapse
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by Katie-Kate on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:20:44 PM AEST
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excellent write Daniel, cannot wait to read more of your work.
Kate |
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Re: lapse
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 02:18:08 PM AEST
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| BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED |
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Re: lapse
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by dolly_dagger on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:31:24 PM AEST
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| wow, i really like this. simplicity is a powerful tool and you use it with such grace. i totally empathise. very real. thank you for sharing. |
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