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Silenced Love
Contributed by
night_child
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:01:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The endless desire
Of a man she cannot have
The longing passion
To love this man
He is perfection
He is the one
He can heal her broken heart
Make her feel again
Feel the joy that only he can bring
His laughter
His voice
His touch
All make her heart sing
Sing a thousand songs of love
Subtle hints are dropped
Telling of her feelings
But he is oblivious
Only seeing a friendship
Sprinkled with moments of lust
So she will stay silent
Keep her love inside
Everyday she sees him
And her tongue will be held tight
A silenced love
A love that will not cease
But hidden it will stay
Until her dying day
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night_child
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2004-02-07 12:01:31]
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Re: Silenced Love
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 12:33:04 PM AEST
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"But he is oblivious
Only seeing a friendship"
Nice write.... I can relate....men can be so clueless sometimes! |
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Re: Silenced Love
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:23:51 PM AEST
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Lol liked the previous comment :p. Hmm this poem is very good and the theme is one which a lot of poeple can relate to. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Silenced Love
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:39:46 PM AEST
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SOUNDS SO SAD,BUT YOU EXPRESSED IT
VERY WELL! THIS WAS WRITTEN WITH ALOT OF HEART!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Silenced Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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Very well said!! Clueless...yessssssss.....
Jenni |
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Re: Silenced Love
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by whisper-of-night on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:00:10 PM AEST
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Come on ladies! give our men a break will ya!^_^ When the men are too bright, you say we are cocky and untrust-worthy, and when the men are gentle and innocent, we accused of dumb and clueless! Oh no! what are we gonna do! (*banging my head...*)^_^
Hehe, just kidding, a really nice poem, just let him know and give him a bit of time, who knows, things might work out! |
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Re: Silenced Love
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 01:14:44 AM AEST
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Very very nice ! But why not tempt your chance???I don't know who you're writing about but...you'll never know until something is done.And I know how you feel since I'm feeling the same towards someone as well.But I don't think I'm gonna be able to keep in inside,so props to you if you can,just remember that life is short and you may never have this chance again!Loved your poem,
PumpkinPie |
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