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To an angel with broken wings!
Contributed by
venkat
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:01:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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O dear angel of broken wings!
Thou hast fallen from the heavens
And doomed to a hell of sorrows
Thy wings are broken and thy wounds
Are bleeding, thy pain causes me tears;
I feel compassion for thy miserable plight.
Do thou now see nectarine light
While I caress thy broken wings
And heal thy wounds as I kiss thy face
With my sunlit lips of compassion;
Now I breathe my spirit of flames
Into thy mouth and purge thy soul
Thy soul is now purified and uplifted;
Rise up and unfold thy wings of light
Like a new born Phoenix take a flight
To reach the heaven with beautiful lotus
That bloomed in the lake of my heart!
venkat
7-2-2004
( from the forum Soul to Soul )
Copyright ©
venkat
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2004-02-07 05:01:21]
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:04:57 AM AEST
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Venkat, you never cease to amaze me. Your style is so unique, and the unwavering quality of your poetry is astounding. Another one for the ages.
Truly,
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:20:00 AM AEST
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| V.S...your comment is ambrosial to my poetic Muse..thank you friend....V.N |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:26:22 AM AEST
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Very well done my friend, a beauty of a write. Thanks for sharing.
The Phantom |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:42:40 AM AEST
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| very sweet and uplifting poem, i took it to heart this mornin' and feel a little better ...your poetry always makes my soul smile, its so genuine:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:48:46 PM AEST
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PRETTY CREATIVE! THAT WAS SO HEART FELT!! GREAT JOB!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:45:55 PM AEST
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I do love this one it made me feel warm inside!
Thanks for this! Christina |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:14:39 PM AEST
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WOW Venkat!!! This is amazing..... I love it!!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:36:28 PM AEST
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Oh wow what a breath taking poem, loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 10:08:53 PM AEST
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| God Bless your Heart, I was reading the forums, your work is so slendid, a true deepness within you has arised, I commend you for the power you have, Take Care Val |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 04:16:49 AM AEST
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Hi venkat,
i realy enjoy this poem, it is very beautiful.
full with love and tender care. |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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| wow...this is another great piece..K |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:30:18 PM AEST
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did u by chance read my poem ANGEL WITH A BROKEN WING somewhere?
Wwwwoo great friend of mine this one jus blows me away. It's powerfull, tender, compasonate but most of all it's tottally healing. It's magical in the lake of your heart.....ddddddaaaa speachless
luv, hugs,
emy
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 12:21:46 PM AEST
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She spreads her wings...once again able to take flight with the armor of compassion...
Thank you for the much needed breath of fresh air!
~~~Angel~~~always...godspeed...~joni~ |
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by SuicidalSon on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:38:21 AM AEST
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This seems to be the opposite of my angel with broken wings poem. Or maybe an answer to it, but I still believe if ever an angel
falls to earth she'll never go back to heaven
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Re: To an angel with broken wings!
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:31:11 PM AEST
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| i very much enjoy your style of writing and the topics... im envious... well done.... :) |
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