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Notice Me

Contributed by Remi on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:12:45 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

NOTICE ME

Nov, 15, 03
9:03 am

I'm tired of being the table holder for my girlfriends
I'm tired of u trying to go through me so u can be in her pains
I'm tired of sitting at the table for hours watching u like at school In lunch line ready to pick your
meat

Running around them In circle like a pack of tiger do they pray, like some damm dogs In heat

Please don't tell me u don't notice me cause u think I'm to
independent
bold
strong-will
opinionated
intelligent
That I have to much fire
Why don't u notice my heart, soulfulness, gracefulness, my love, my pride my groofness sense of humour

That I don't know how to stay in my place
I question a man to much well If u not doing your job rite be ready to be question

If u can't be the man of the house then I will be both
If u can't lead the army to the front then I'm prepare
If u can't be the king well their a old sang behind a every good king their a good queen

behind every good man their a good women

I'm prepare to do both
I'm tired of hearing what size I should be or the way I look

please half of u men are bald with beer guts balding can't get it up but u think women should still want u, ***** please.
If we have to be a certain way then u have to be a certain way but those are lame a** accused about me being to strong will or to bold that there are the reason u don't talk to me

Because I'm to curving for u to talktive and I'm not concider attractive as u like or beautiful or that well portion body or face that u like on tv

But it hurt me the most that one thing that u don't notice that I would like for u to notice

IS ME

Remy Maskantinio

Copyright © Remi ... [ 2004-02-07 02:12:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Notice Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:22:27 PM AEST
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Remi I have been there! It took about 4 years for him to notice me but when he did, he really did. Your poem brought back so many things to me what it is like to want to be noticed. Thank you for sharing it. Kie

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