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The pain is so real
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 07:16:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The pain is so real
It’s deep down in my soul
Everything that I try to do
To get rid of it never works.
The pain is so deep down
In my heart that when ever
I think about it hurts so much.
Sometimes when the pain is
Really strong I just want to kill
Myself but if can never go through
with it.
Everytime that I try to kill
Myself I can never find
Away to do it
Sometimes when the pain is
Really really strong I just want
To leave this world and never come
Back again.
The pain is so real
It’s deep down in my soul
Everything that I try to do
To get rid of it never works.
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lildrama04
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2004-02-06 19:16:19]
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Re: The pain is so real
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 01:27:43 AM AEST
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| For me, most things i do only mask the pain, keep it at bay. Its always there and never seems to go away. Im sorry you feel this way, i can understand. The poem was nicely written, hope things get better |
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Re: The pain is so real
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:21:09 AM AEST
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| 2.6 on the Nortiscale. There's some feeling here. For the last paragraph - I'd suggest ex-lax |
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