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Ivory Skin Hoe

Contributed by ml02 on Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 07:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Roses wilt
Thorns pierce
Into your tender
Ivory skin
Why don't you just kill
Yourself?

Take the knife
And
Press down
Make it hurt
Scream out
I don't care.

You died
Long ago
To me
When
I said
Goodnight
Goodbye
And don't cry
Its not that appealing
Your mascara
Runnin' all down
Your cheeks
And face
Hell
You're not appealing
With your makeup
All in place
Can't make you any uglier.

Agony
Cause you want me
Badly
And all you hear
Is me saying
Hell no
I've moved on
To better things
Go ****
Another guy
You nasty hoe
****in' the whole town.

But
Thank you
For makin' me see
It just all ****ed up
We were never meant
To be
Just playin' fools
To think
It could last
And thats what deppressed me
That and you
Smothering me
Needing me
Every waking
****ing
Moment of the day
But
Goodbye
**** you
Its over
Tear
Tear
Bullet in the head
You're dead.

Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2002-09-05 19:50:14]
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Re: Ivory Skin Hoe (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 08:34:10 AM AEST
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Yes I did find your poem disturbing but hey! you writing down what you feel is what its all about right.
good write.

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