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Plain to See
Contributed by
lonelyheart
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Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:25:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've given up on trying to change your mind,
I've given up on the hope of my love you would find.
It's plain to see, You're happy without me.
I still think of you from time to time,
And I can't think of anything to make this rhyme.
It's plain to see, You're happy without me.
There are days that would go by,
and nights I would sit and cry.
But it's plain to see, You're happy without me.
Giving up can be so easy to do,
I just never wanted to give up on loving you.
But it's plain to see, You're happy without me!
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lonelyheart
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2004-02-06 01:25:04]
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Re: Plain to See
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by Tichawangana on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:37:05 AM AEST
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Hi Lonelyheart
It's plain to see you really want this person back. Keep writing. Poetry is life! |
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Re: Plain to See
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 02:28:46 AM AEST
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| I can feel the love that you feel for this person - I've felt it myself. Don't give up though...someday soon you are going to find someone who appreciates you for who you are. |
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Re: Plain to See
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:43:32 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. |
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