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Virgin
Contributed by
spaded
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Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 01:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There is love spoken in what I've done because of you, sorry if that is not enough for you
what is it you would have me say to you
that could speak louder than my vows to myself
that there will be no one else
because lately i realize
I can't count on my eyes
to satisfy any thing but my cries
for carnal satisfaction
based on physical attraction
well i've had all that before
now i want something more
why did you have to do that for
treating me with such respect
well exactly what did you expect
that you would find
inside my mind
being so kind
did you know all along
that most people have it wrong
there is so much inside of me
and all that I will ever be
is because you set me free
of peoples false perceptions
and my willing self deceptions
in fact I sometimes want to die
and I really want to cry
when I see the lie
with which I had to start
this note from my heart
because I know you can not stay
but thank you for the things you say
and for the outstanding way
you have been to me
since I've let you see
all that I had thought
I would not
be caught
revealing of my self
to anyone else
now though
I know
I really can
find a man
to understand
that love sets you free
and it doesn't have to be
just about the body
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2002-09-05 13:10:00]
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Re: Virgin
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by LJ on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 02:20:36 PM AEST
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| Well put, and very true. I think we all get sick of lust and long for something more! It is out there it just takes patience and faith. |
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Re: Virgin
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by Jule on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 02:14:47 PM AEST
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| this poem really makes you hink about the choices you make. thanks for helping me think about what i do. . . . |
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