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When it happens
Contributed by
tecnorobo
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wake up late
White surrounding
Whispering to myself
While dreaming of summer
How long will it take?
Has she found out?
Hopes never got me anywhere
Having thought to much
Tired of waiting
Tried once
Trusted my instinct
Turmoil haunted after
It’s white again
Idly I dream once more
Indeed I will wait
Breaking all boundaries when it happens
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2004-02-05 23:48:55]
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Re: When it happens
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:46:02 AM AEST
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Dark, yet serene, and oh so vague... creepy AND cool... awesome!
~Remy~ |
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Re: When it happens
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:34:48 AM AEST
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| Fascinating in a very dreamy sort of way.. |
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