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Gone
Contributed by
MariaXsoccerXrock
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She was in the back of the car
doing something bad, taking it way to far
coudn't realize what she was doing was wrong
and she was doing it for so long
hit by hit, she took in the smoke
took so much it made her choke
I watched, praying every hit was her last
Finally her last, too late, away her life passed
it only took 1 night
to take her life away
never got to tell her
all i needed to say
wishing she was here
but shes gone
looking at her casket
staring at her eyes
they were still red, from the last time she got high
it's hard for me to listen
it's hard for me to say it
it's just so hard to believe it
but shes gone
In the car we're on our way home
didn't realize the driver was stoned
flashing lights was the last thing i saw
as we crashed the car, that killed us all
now it only took 1 night
to take my life away
it's not fair the driver was on drugs
and now im gone
take the time to listen, take the time to care
my sister and i smoked weed for the first time
and now we're gone
...so long
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2004-02-05 21:53:47]
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Re: Gone
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:09:22 PM AEST
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| Yes, yes, you definately have a natural flow of things. Drugs are a crutch for weak people, and thats the ***** truth. Wiggy write. |
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Re: Gone
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:40:46 PM AEST
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Awesome write. It is hought provoking...if only the dead could come back and speak... I think someone who died this way would say the same exact thing.
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