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Blame
Contributed by
MariaXsoccerXrock
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Everything inside my head
every time i think im dead
i wake up to see im not
turn my head and change the clock
12 hours back so i can pretend
that this night will never end
that i'll never have to spend 1 more day
living the life i hate in every way
and all these feelings deep inside
wanting to cry, wanting to die
my tears, fears and all the beers
lead me to you
and i blame you
I BLAME YOU
Throw the empty bottle
in the air and onto the ground
shatters like the pieces of my heart
but i have no sound
my tears are quiet
and so i hide
all these feelings deep inside
and all of this
leads me to you
and i blame you
I BLAME YOU
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MariaXsoccerXrock
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2004-02-05 21:46:46]
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Re: Blame
(User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:06:02 PM AEST
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| Hoohoo! I love the flow of this. It was like my eyes were cascading down a waterfall of blood and hate!!! Wee!!! Good write. |
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Re: Blame
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:19:51 PM AEST
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I love this! Especially the first stanza, the rhymes and flow are awesome. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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