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lonely

Contributed by epoet on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:04:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



lonlieness fills my heart and mind
while searching for someone kind
i am so destested among every one around
i am lost and by no one am i found

they call me names and hurt me so
i have nowhere and no one to whom i can go
even i hate me
i just want to be liked,dont you see?

is it to hard to say hi
to a lonely passerby
i suppose it might
for i still am alone at night.




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Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie big hug* You are very talented to write this poem and u sound like a lovely person with deep feelings and compassion. How sad for other people they are missing to know the real you. Its not always easy when people are being mean but look within yourself and know you are a creation of beauty love yourself the rest will follow.
Hugs
Carmen


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:19:57 PM AEST
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Hi buddy!!! (see, someone do say hi!^_^) Do not get depressed!!! When I was 13, I came to UK as a foreigner, speak no english, knows nobody, and of course, I always got picked on and hardly anybody cares, now that was a tough time, but hey so what!!! Now I doing just fine!!! Making friends and enjoying the life! (hum? are we talking about you or me, again?^_^) So you see, what you are going through right now are probably just something which quite normal, and do sure you tried hard enough to meet people? But do NEVER hate youself, because that is when the things really gets bad!!!


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:35:43 PM AEST
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Hey, sweetheart. Look, you may not be all "popular" as how you want to be, but you do have friends around you. Even if the number is as minimum as 5, at least they know YOU and they aren't fake like others you see around you. Popularity, sweetie, that's just a show to impress people around them. They're plastic. At least, with the friends that you have, you know they're real and don't like you because of some popular thing you have, but for your character, your talents, and charisma.

You're a good person, and if other people can't see that, then there's no use to waste your energy over them. As far as I can see, they're blinded by their own egos to realize how good of a person they're passing a chance to meet.

Sweetie, you're wonderful! And you're gonna blossom in the years to come! Trust me, you'll see that these high school days aren't so significant.

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:58:44 PM AEST
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Okay, I'm not going be try to cheer you up; however, I will tell you why they might hate you and why I really don't like you right now. You're whining!!! When I was 13 I only had two friends, and one of them was the that one guy at school that no one liked. You know, cause everyone thought he was mentally insane. I think you're making yourself more put upon then you really are. Anyway, I did like the made you wrote your poem, except for the careless mispelling. :P


Re: lonely (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:12:44 PM AEST
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Well I'm sorry to hear the tough time you're going through. But you know, you just have to be strong and persevere. I barely have any friends now but I make it through life. You can too.


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:22:06 PM AEST
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stay true to yourself, be you, true friends will be in your life and the ones you have now are more than a lot of people can say they have, lotsa love, hugs nessa


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:29:06 PM AEST
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First of all 5 friends is more than a lot of people have...Second those that make fun of you are ugly on the inside and who needs that kind of people for friends...Third if you do not believe in yourself and don't see your own inner beauty how do you expect others to see it...You write beautifully you have a talent that most people will never be able to come close..look at the beauty you hold within and let it shine don't worry about the puppets out there they are the ones who lose out in the end...you will come out just right

Shari


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:58:19 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE TO ME YOUR BIGGEST PROBLEM IS.....BEING SHY! SO IN TURN, U
HAVE A LOW SELF ESTEEM!! DON'T LET ON
TO ANYONE THAT WHAT THEY SAY OR DO BOTHERS YOU!!! IT'S REALLY DIFFICULT I KNOW-I WENT THROUGH IT TO!!!! BUT IF THEY KNOW IT UPSETS YOU,THEN IT'LL ONLY GET WORSE!!!!! JUST TRY & BE MORE OPEN,IF OTHER PEOPLE CAN SEE THE SAME PERSON THAT'S BEHIND YOUR
POETRY,THEN THERE GONNA SEE SOMEONE SPECIAL!!!!!! TAKE CARE!!!!!!!
DAN!!!!!!!!


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:10:10 AM AEST
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I went through this as well.Ill tell you something all those kids that are so popular right now and so mean well wait until high school is over and everyone gets into the real world. The most popular prettiest girls around become regular people in a big world some get ugly on the outside as well.I always said it was bad karma for the way they acted in earlier years in school so thier ugliness shows from the inside out later on. Five friends is a great thing.Cherish them and they will be around for years to come. DOnt let what they say hurt you there must be a reason for them to single you out and make you the object of their teasing.I see it as they may see things in you they wished they had in themselves but wont admit it!! Hang in there,you dont need them anyway!
michelle


Re: lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:47:37 PM AEST
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Hey dude
I know exactly how your feeling, i was never liked at school at your age, infact i was hated by alot of people throught school i only had like 2 friends most, but i tried my best and i pulled through, i have like 5 friends now that i can say will always be there for me trust me things will get better.
As you grow up yor find that it doesnt matter who likes you and how popular you are, what matters is how the people that consider you a friend see you and how you feel inside, dont take any notice of the 'populars' and just go for whatever you want you never know where your end up :)!!

All the best dude

Luke




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