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Hey You
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:56:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hey you
do you remember me
i am the girl
you used to see
hey you
how have you been
do you see this guy i'm with
he's the new you
hey you
i bet you're sorry now
that i stopped coming around
i stopped playing your games
hey you
do you miss me
i don't miss you
i was the lucky one
i found someone new
and i ended up
forgetting you
Copyright ©
pyrochick
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2004-02-05 20:56:14]
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Re: Hey You
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:49:01 PM AEST
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| oh, sounds like your doing better now, if your old bow didnt have time for you and played games then you did the right thing leavin' him in the dust, wishing you the best in your new relationship, be happy:) keep writing too! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hey You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:49:39 PM AEST
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LOL!
nice job - an ode to ex b/f's everywhere.
*sob*
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Re: Hey You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 02:19:47 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry but it seems like you haven't moved on. It sems like the void of this person leaving wasn't resolved until you had someone to replace them. And, are you truely over it when the fact that they left your life moves you to write about them. If you are truely over them, you wouldn't have even been moved to write this... |
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Re: Hey You
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by Pyrochick on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:00:36 PM AEST
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| this is to 'anonymous' ok yea so im not truly over them. but i woudln't be moved to write if they didn't mean that much to me |
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Re: Hey You
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by remote on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:36:47 PM AEST
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| Wow, great poem. |
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