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Useless and Wasted
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Wasted space
in a wasted world
Wasted words
in a wasted mind
Wasted time
in a wasted place.
Wasted thoughts
on wasted ones.
Useless space
to useless ones
Useless words
To useless minds.
Useless time
to useless things.
Useless thoughts
to the useless ones.
This is what
we've become.
What we've
made.
Useless and wasted
like all around.
We've destroyed
everthing we had.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-02-05 20:01:30]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Useless and Wasted
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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Your words aren't part of the uselessness. Keep letting your voice out.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Useless and Wasted
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:28:46 PM AEST
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| sometimes I think our poetry is wasted because it gets so many reads and so few comments...as if it's not worth a word..or a vote of even one star. I'm often so sad..I know this isn't the subject of your poem, but it brought to mind useless things...Good job. |
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