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Ache
Contributed by
remy
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:46:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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morning calls and i receive
strobe lights of sunlight's crackled rays
ache.
eat.
hell.
peeve.
that's the truth coming to, but i couldn't tell
and evening sickness reigns it's smell
another bienvenidos comes all to well
persistant rant in this hell of hells
sauntering back to front yes i fell
wait...
give me a number and i'll impale you with a wager
hail crowned and spent out!
sowing so plainly gives way to
ache, break, take a number and
wait...
ache!
eat!
hell heaven hell hell!
peave.
and that's truth all to you, but i couldn't sell
it's morning sickness reigning it comes to dwell
all grace is checked off to something else
and still the rant comes out as a western bell
sulking front to back yes i fell
wait...
where is the number?
what's the record of the wager?
check mate and spent out!
sowing this plainly gives way to
mistake, so fake, take another and
wait...
come on in get ready begin
forcing over to focus, broken, so close
settle down and lose what i've found
that's what i wanted... yea
coming in where should i begin
giving in to soaps, freakish, this close
settled down thinking drops to the ground
when i'm target bait... oh well
ache eat!
ache eat!
hell peave!
hell peave!
wait...
number
wager
drunk broke and spent out!
sowing yes plainly give way to
ache, ache, ache again but i'll
wait...
come on in hey you come again
force your way over, under, closer
settlement all to your betterment
that's what you want... yea
coming on comes the sweeter song
well here's the chorale, so sour, closest
settling all while breaking through
like pure target bait... so swell
ache eat!
eat!
hell peave!
peave!
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-02-05 19:46:57]
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Re: Ache
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:45:44 AM AEST
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sheesh... 20 reads and no comments? what's wrong with these people?....
this is very well written with some really strong images... as for the subject matter, just keep riding it out, I'm here for ya if you need.
Dani
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Re: Ache
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:24:25 PM AEST
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| what's wrong with these people??? I've been on that rampage for soo long...and nada changes. this poem deserves a lot more comments not to mention some votes...people just want to click on so they can post their own poetry. (my humble opinion only) Maybe if Mick changed the rules and locked us out so we couldn't post until we made a comment? LOL....Well this is good and I'm on my way behind the curtain to vote... |
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Re: Ache
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:45:48 AM AEST
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Very intense and good poem. It's a shame that only so few people gave you feedback on this one!
Hur |
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