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Without You
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My teardrops fall
My heart cries
My soul does call
All in all, I die
Another day
Without your eyes
What can I say
When all in me dies?
And so a week
Has passed me by
My heart still seeks
My eyes run dry
A month has gone
Without your touch
The pain is strong
I love you so much!
And now a year
How great the pain
I so want you near
The hurt I can’t contain
Your hugs, your lips
Your smile, your eyes
Every day, deeper I slip
Into deep sorrow, I die
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wachumiri
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2004-02-05 19:17:30]
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Re: Without You
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by Remy on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:51:34 PM AEST
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romantic pinings, such drivel... but hey i'm a sucker too - so this writing is well said and spent!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Without You
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by Lovingangel4u on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:20:06 PM AEST
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Im sorry u feel this way it so empty when the person you love isnt with u well written but so painful.
Carmen |
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Re: Without You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:28:30 PM AEST
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Oh my brother....
I wish I could bring her there for your birthday. *cries*
Emily
I AM GLAD YOU CALLED HER! :) |
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Re: Without You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 10:11:46 PM AEST
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| Hi there,<br />
First thanks for your comments etc.<br />
This is sad but written very well.<br />
Good job.<br />
luv, huggs,<br />
emy |
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Re: Without You
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:08:55 AM AEST
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Your sorrow and committment here are so strong....my how you've changed. What great love.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Without You
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 11:38:19 PM AEST
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I just wrote a poem with this same title tonight. My husband is gone for the weekend and I was missing him something fierce. I'm sad to know that all over the world so many others are feeling the same.
hugs for us all, Ann |
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