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Be Good Sweetie
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:00:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Be good sweetie, I'll give you a Rolex.
Fine watch of gold, best you've ever had.
You will be a queen of city's fair sex.
I will take apartment, really nice pad.
High, tall place where you will never be sad.
You will go to my small country home soon.
Take a ride on a horse I've bought named Glad.
Time together we'll walk sharing bright moon.
Active chirping crickets make a lovely night's tune.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2004-02-05 19:00:59]
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Re: Be Good Sweetie
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:04:28 PM AEST
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| good ryhm but more imagery |
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Re: Be Good Sweetie
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:43:43 AM AEST
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| Sweet pledge of a lover.....nice imagery there. |
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