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Would you?
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 06:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Would you?
If I were to stumble,
Would you be there to catch me?
If I was to need a shoulder to cry on,
Would you lend me yours?
If I were sick in bed,
Would you nurse me back to health?
Would you?
Would you be next to me in the morn,
To kiss my face.
Would you be there,
If i was struggling through poverty?
Would you,
love me??
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Re: Would you?
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by bluoreo on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 06:51:00 PM AEST
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I believe this poem was very touching and is exactly how i've been feeling lately. it was straight to the point. i loved it. great job.
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Re: Would you?
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:05:22 PM AEST
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Really good. You expressed your feelings very well. I wish you the best of luck.
Take care.
David |
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