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Untitled
Contributed by
Eriskay
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 04:09:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Help me
find a path
in this giant world
where joy and pain
are blurred
into the grey
that masquerades as success.
Help me
find strength
in this panicked rush
where time and peace
are forgotten casualties of a war
that masquerades as progress.
Help me
find you
in this lonely life
where hope and love
are struggling
for survival in stones
that masquerade as hearts.
Copyright ©
Eriskay
... [
2004-02-05 16:09:07]
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Re: Untitled
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 04:21:15 PM AEST
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| wow, I know how you feel |
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Re: Untitled
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:59:43 PM AEST
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Hope and Love struggling... May they live on, for the world is in need of them.
Take care. Hold on to hope.
David |
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Re: Untitled
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:14:10 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net! This is a lovely poem... love the metaphors used..
Jenni |
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