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Broken-Hearted Valentine
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 03:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The day is fast approaching,
It celebrates couples everywhere.
Men buy rings and flowers
For their girlfriends or their wives.
Everybody's happy,
Everyone but me.
Because the day is Valentine's
And today I'm her
Broken-hearted Valentine.
To Her:
I told you I love you,
And you said the same,
But now you're gone
And with your leaving,
The sunshine follows, making way
For the rain.
Now I'm alone on this day I hat,
And today I hate it more;
I'm your broken-hearted Valentine.
Copyright ©
Solmyr1404
... [
2004-02-05 15:36:30]
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Re: Broken-Hearted Valentine
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by Kie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:00:37 PM AEST
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| Oh my this one touched me. Brought tears to my eyes. The ending was so perfect. You expressed yourself really well in this one. Kie |
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Re: Broken-Hearted Valentine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:22:18 PM AEST
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I like this one Solmyr.......i'm trying to register, but this stupid computer is being a pain in the butt. I still have to read your other poem, but i bet it's gona be good
Kaila
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