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You Crashed
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You came back to me
Crashed in through the door
Threw me up against the wall
And left me, bleeding on the floor
You picked the wrong time
To keep us all under agony
Picked me up off the ground bleeding
Whispering your blasphemy
Your echoes of remembrance
Stole from my eyes of dismay
I'd like to tear your heart out
Crush it through my fingers in an ugly way
Your calls remain unanswered
You made me lose my page
I'll torch my book with sorrows
Remember the promises we made
Not sure where we like you
It's not as we destroyed ourselves
You took from me forever
And I searched for no one else
You came in through the door
Saw me breathing slow
You chose to save me oxygen
Then I chose for you to go
Repay the debts thereafter
I'm winning on my knees
You crashed in through the door as always
And I'm lying here on the ground, the one who bleeds
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Re: You Crashed
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by Remy on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:37:12 AM AEST
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Your pastels of darkness paint some glimmer of hope, I like that. Good stuff you got here.
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Re: You Crashed
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by arden on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 11:02:37 AM AEST
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awesome, i loved this so dark and really good.
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