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You dobbing lier!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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in school,
i'm now in ****,
because of this twisted b**ch,
her and her mates always give my friend ****,
and we've had enough of it!
we started at her with our group,
told her to leave us alone,
what we didn't say was that we would,
snap her bones!
we just told her to leave us alone!
so she plays the innocent b**ch,
said one of us, said,
she'd snap the chain round her neck,
said a small year 7 said,
she could beat the **** out of her,
said i pushed into her ,
said "we", always treat her like dirt!
said at lunch that year 7 threw chips at her,
said that my friend is always starting at her!
now i got involved coz,
my friend felt low,
i got involved coz they called her disabled sister,
a mental c*w!
i got involved coz they sent my friend an abusive txt.
but i swear on my life!
we didn't do what she said!
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deathdrop
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2004-02-05 12:12:54]
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Re: You dobbing lier!
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:33:11 PM AEST
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| wow she sounds mental...good venting poem! keep them coming! |
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Re: You dobbing lier!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:19:15 PM AEST
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| weird,couldn't understand much,phrases are jumbled,sounds like some one's got issues?? |
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Re: You dobbing lier!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:20:14 PM AEST
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| how old r u?most of your lines had grammar errors or just didn't make sense |
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