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simply a bad day
Contributed by
nate
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 06:32:47 AM in AEST
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hbadday
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look, it went like this,
woke up to the floor i kissed,
dont know how i got there,
but best believe i was *****,
i got up and said whatever took a shower,
got dressed,
went up to this girl,
got straight up dismissed,
later on in the day,
thought it would be okay,
but another brother was out,
to make it unfortunate for me,
he robbed me straight up,
in the middle of the mall,
and i still get kicked out,
when he "trips and falls"
it wasnt my fault he shouldnt have touched me at all,
so now im in a steel box,
close to downtown city hall,
waiting for my phone time,
even though i aint got no one to call,
then i got out,
i got dressed and hit up the club,
no one in that sweaty place,
was showing me love,
people rushing to the dance floor,
im getting pushed and shoved,
i know im allready drunk,
but this place just simply sucks,
so i go to the bar,
get another drink down,
then proceed to my car,
get stopped by the cops,
they escort me home,
next thing i know,
"Whos this on the phone?"
people calling me,
its two a.m.,
hanging up on people,
including my friends,
finally got to sleep,
then all of a sudden im hurt,
i finally realized i was sleeping,
in dirt,
dont know how i got there,
and i dont care when,
cause on the real it dont matter,
i was simply having a bad day again... .
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nate
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2004-02-05 06:32:47]
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Re: simply a bad day
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by Remy on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:33:00 PM AEST
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Ah yes, the revelries of youth... joy, in another day. Interesting write.
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Re: simply a bad day
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by jeanie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:24:03 AM AEST
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hmm, I don't super agree with remy....it's nto always youth behaving this way and having bad days...though I'm just 21, so maybe you can think I cannot know, but I have some experience so far and have my views, so :p
a bad day is not a problem as long as it doesn¨t lead to a bad week, a bad month or a bad year...but then, still someone will be there for you when the rain starts to pour, no matter if it hasn't been your day or a year :)
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