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wishing on a star
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:58:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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if i could wish apon a star id wish to be...
...where you are
because im so in love it hurts
and love comes before all the other feelings...
...love always comes first
so hold me now if you will
...and my heart ill glady spill
because to be with you...
...is a wish come true
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2004-02-05 05:58:37]
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Re: wishing on a star
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by Nate on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:10:24 AM AEST
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i think that said alot in so little lines
great poem |
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Re: wishing on a star
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:37:46 AM AEST
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Great write...
Cheers,
#13 |
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