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Black Prayer
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:55:57 AM in AEST
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Dementia stole my
mind last night.
She took my
breath away.
I could taste
insanity resting
gently on her lips.
I could feel
her body wrapped
against me.
Making love atop
her grave to be.
Angels shrieking
in my head as
I thrust deep
inside her.
She whispered
that she hated me
as she screamed
in lust.
She's my angel
of death.
Here to bring
genocide to light.
Her eyes like
a dying light.
Alpha and Omega.
The dying of
all life.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-05 01:55:57]
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Re: Black Prayer
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:06:21 AM AEST
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this was brilliantly dark. I loved it glad u decided to share it with us.
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Re: Black Prayer
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:19:35 AM AEST
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amazingly interesting. liked it alot. thanx for sharing.
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Re: Black Prayer
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:48:24 AM AEST
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That first line gave me shivers... I could hear it in my head, being spoken in this chillingly calm, emotionless voice... creepy!! After that every line just pulled me in and kept me riveted. You never fail to amaze me.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Black Prayer
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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| thanks. I hate your dark side. Now I can go back to the watnting to slap you through the computer again...its what I needed. LOL write one about making love on top of someone's grave on a foggy moonlit night...next to a man digging a fresh one....bats flying round dripping blood......that'll "suck" em in |
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Re: Black Prayer
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by Ruby1987 on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:29:18 PM AEST
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Dis iz so dark. It iz totally different, displaying a strong image.
Dark2Dark
Ruby1987(Aaliyah)
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Re: Black Prayer
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by Kie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:54:02 PM AEST
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| It was dark and I liked it. Kie |
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Re: Black Prayer
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:45:54 PM AEST
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this is vivid and dark and i love it..
charlotte x_x_x
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Re: Black Prayer
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 05:45:23 PM AEST
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Great imagery!! Awesome write, Jeff...
Jenni |
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Re: Black Prayer
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:40:59 PM AEST
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Another dark suggesting creepy one, this one had more imagery, very disturbing, and the wording full of parallelism if you know what i mean, and if you don't ......don't ask me :p lol
Anne :D |
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Re: Black Prayer
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:18:08 AM AEST
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| love it, hugs n' love nessa |
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