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Trust Faith

Contributed by bluoreo on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:03:31 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I feel like writing
But I don’t know what to write
I feel indifferent
Nothing feels right
Nothing makes sense
I am trying to act normal
Act like myself
But I can’t
It takes too much energy
Too much effort

Trying not to let him know that something is wrong with me
I laugh and smile
Putting on my fake skin that I can only see through
Even if he did ask
I would lie
I would say that I’m fine
Why would anything be wrong?
He wouldn’t believe me
He would know I’m lying
How can he tell?
Is it that obvious?

He is the only one who knows
He can see through me
Even though I barely know him
He knows everything about me
How is that?

I hide from his questions
I don’t want to answer
For what I tell him might ruin our friendship forever
And this cannot happen
I don’t know what I would do without him
He is the only one who keeps me sane
He is one of the few close, true friends I have
Or at least I think so
Hopefully he’ll still be here when times get tough
Maybe he’ll be the one who’ll stick around when all others forsake me

So far he has always been there for me
And swears he always will
I will trust him
I am going to have faith in him
Because he has faith in me

Copyright Â© bluoreo ... [ 2004-02-04 23:03:31]
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Re: Trust Faith (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:36:23 PM AEST
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Malcontent spawns problems if not resolved...trust me, acting is never the answer if it hurts you so. It hurt me pretty badly. It was a very insightful write, and I wish you the best.

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