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Quiet
Contributed by
corbin286
on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 08:51:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Quiet is the world,
Through the eyes of the truth
Quiet is my soul as I watch him with you
Trusting his arms as you once did mine
Quiet is my pain as the light seems subdue
In the dark of the night, I'm no longer blind
You leave me there in the frozen shadows
Frozen in time finding nothing sublime
In the heart of content, where is thy heart
Icy hints hush soft lust
Smile to the past that never was
Lying cold trying to find trust
Left behind in the lover's mind
Torn hearts lost souls waste away with time
Once was something, what is now?
Copyright ©
corbin286
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2002-09-05 08:51:37]
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Re: Quiet
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:36:09 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, i know
what this feels like all to well
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Quiet
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 10:43:03 PM AEST
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| This is a really good write. I can see why it's your favorite...I love it. |
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Re: Quiet
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by azn_poet811 on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 04:39:00 PM AEST
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| For some reason these lines seems very familiar. They touch me, as if they came from my own lips. |
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Re: Quiet
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by SugarCoatedSweetness on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 03:52:58 PM AEST
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| This Is Really Good!!! I Like It Alot! ;o) |
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