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Beneath It Al

Contributed by intelectualpoet on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 08:55:18 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

As I look around me,
The walls begin to close in.
I’m trapped,
Like a fly caught in a spiders web,
As the spider comes closer,
I panic,
But moving only makes it worse.
I cant give up,
This isn’t the end,
I’m not going out like this.

A flash of light fills the room.

Everything is fine,
It was only a dream,
No harm was done.

I close my eyes,
The snake behind me hisses
What my damage could have been.
My blood before me begs me.
Open up my heart again.

And I feel this coming over me like a storm again.
Considerately.

The snakes venomous voice beckons me,
Calling me, begging me.
Making false promises,
Lies,
All lies.

A flash of light fills the room.

I’m no longer alone,There's a beautiful girl in the room.
She stared at me.
I know she worries about me.
A tear falls from the corner of her eye.
I watch the tear as it falls slowly down her cheek.
It begins to pick up speed,
leaving only a trail.

I walk slowly up to her,
As I get closer,
A smile begins to appear on my face.
All the fear is beneath me now.
She saved my soul,
I am forever eternally grateful.
I love her.

Copyright Â© intelectualpoet ... [ 2004-02-04 20:55:18]
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Re: Beneath It Al (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:47:52 PM AEST
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You definitely poured into this one, I can tell. I like your imagery. You have a way with your words.. Good job!

Jazz

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