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we are different.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:46:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I not you,
you not me,
they not them.
we not us
are all on one bus.
that spin up in space.
who can we trust
no one but us.
stand strong,hold on
the joy we share keep us there.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
... [
2004-02-04 17:46:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: we are different.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shadow on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:52:29 PM AEST (User
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Short. Sweet. to the point. It's a ok poem. Could have used a little more emotion though. Overall it was ok! keep it going. |
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Re: we are different.
(User Rating: 1 ) by MariaXsoccerXrock on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:52:59 PM AEST (User
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brief and to the point...i like |
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