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Don't mind me
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Don’t mind me
I’m just having a bad day
My life is in shambles
But eventually I will be okay
Don’t mind me
I’m just having a bad week
Too much stress all around
Some relief is all I seek
Don’t mind me
I’m just having a bad month
Thoughts of death run thru my head
Not the first time, but the seventh
Don’t mind me
I’m just having a bad year
As the knife slices my skin
Down my cheek falls a lonely tear
Don’t mind me
I’m just having a bad life
Nothing to show for it
I’m just somebody’s wife
Don’t mind me
I will soon be no more
The knife cuts deep
as I lay down upon the floor
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-02-04 17:21:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Don't mind me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:42:14 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much. A very strong poem, I can relate to this piece alot. |
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Re: Don't mind me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:42:36 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much. A very strong poem, I can relate to this piece alot. |
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Re: Don't mind me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jolly on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 03:43:14 AM AEST (User
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I loved the theme..bad day..bad week, etc. don't like the ending, although I relate to it. My son and I used to get in the doldrums and he'd say,"mom let's form a suicide pact...you go first." LOL. That joke always got me out of it.... |
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