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Autumn's Breeze
Contributed by
PassionatelyRomantic
on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her dazzling eyes are but night's eternity-
an infinite array of stars in their prime,
arranged in heavenly constellations,
perfectly illuminating the void of nighttime.
Bound only by the limitations of one's life,
one could gaze indefinately into the night,
in search for a more heavenly body,
that yet remains endlessly out of sight.
Yet if you are persistent in your search,
and you search the many mile,
you are sure to resolve your longing
through her innocent smile.
Her smile is but the sun's goodbye,
amidst the canvas of dark and light,
radiating beauty across the vacant sky,
like the wings of an angel in first flight.
Her heavenly existance is but autumn's breath,
as it wisks away the crimson leaves of time,
from rightful bearers-now exposed,
'gainst the harshness of a lover's crime!
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PassionatelyRomantic
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Re: Autumn's Breeze
(User Rating: 1 ) by ooohbutton on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 07:30:55 AM AEST (User
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I must say that this is quite well written. This poem is simply saturated with passion, and that is what I like to hear from poets. Keep up the good work. |
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