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TRAGIC
Contributed by
putteragain
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:49:14 PM in AEST
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Ending this life would be so tragic
disappearing just like magic
just as easy as one two three
is this what you want from me
are these the words you will read
is this the sickness on which you feed
me hateing to be here on earth
nothing is all im worth
are these the words you want to read
darkness fills you just like greed
im not this poet its just a test
to see if i fit with the rest
Michelle
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putteragain
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2004-02-04 14:49:14]
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Re: TRAGIC
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 03:19:54 PM AEST
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incredible write, and so true to the world we live in. But theres no need to fit in with the rest, because we are the normal ones and everyone else is crazy... Normality should be seen as people who can see and feel the world for what it really is;
An endless egotistic fallible society created for the purpose of pure control which in turn is what, as well as egotism, human nature is.
(Lost the thread there, great write)
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Re: TRAGIC
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 07:37:40 PM AEST
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| Michelle this was a really good poem. I really, really liked it... Kie |
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Re: TRAGIC
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:55:36 AM AEST
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Michelle, this was very nicely written..liked it.
one more thing..you have my appreciation to your very nice poems on the forum " soul to soul " hope you will read. your friend.. venkat
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