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Drowning to Inferno
Contributed by
viki
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:10:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Drowning in my sorrow
No hope for tomorrow
I try to breathe
I cannot break free
Through the surface I can see the light
In my heart I know what's wrong and what's right
But now I cannot sort dreams from reality
I do not wish for anyone to take pity on me
As I sink into the cold, dark depths
I think I could have tried harder perhaps
But what's done is done and is in the past
Into my Inferno I'm sinking fast
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Re: Drowning to Inferno
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:44:23 PM AEST
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wow I liked this I'm surprised no one else commented. I can really relate to the inferno part that was awesome. Once again a good write.
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Re: Drowning to Inferno
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by SkYYBLu on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:59:50 PM AEST
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| Great write...I definitely can relate... |
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