Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 05:27:28 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Once a Little Girl

Contributed by viki on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I was once a little girl
carefree and pure
no obligations to tend to
nothing to surrender to

I once ran in fields of white flowers
and even sat up reading books for hours.
I used to dance alone in my room,
or even while sweeping I'd dance with a broom.

I dreamed of a love to sweep me off my feet
I knew a soulmate was out there for me
I would hum a tune in my head and await the day,
when this new love would come to take me away

When you first came, I couldn't speak, I was numb.
You were 10 years olders, eyes brights blue, I felt dumb.
Your good looks charmed me, a girl fifteen.
I wish my eyes could have saw what my mother had seen.

I was sure it was love at first sight
Anyone who got in our way I was willing to fight
You were my mentor, my father figure,
and I would have defended you through any kind of weather.

Then I started to notice your deceitful behavior
For once I was no longer in your favor
Now after 4 1/2 years I try to leave,
but all those years of torment , abuse, and neglect took a toll on me.

I was once a little girl
Not a care in the world
Then your corrupt lust took it all away
Since then I have never seen a sunny day.

Copyright © viki ... [ 2004-02-04 14:04:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Once a Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by princess_of_pain on Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 11:23:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

another great write!!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com