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Frozen in the snow
Contributed by
lonesomerose
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 03:40:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Wind is howling blowing snowflakes about
everything seems to be creaking
in every corner of this house
maybe it will blow down is what I tend to think
then Ill get caught up in a whirlwind
and end up outside in the frozen creek.
See me streaking in my jammies
bouncing across the frozen yard
might look like wizard of oz except with snow
and no pretty green yards.
Im trying to be happy though I hate this snow
Im tired of feeling frozen and the blue
discoloration of my nose.
Lonesome tonight I wouldnt say
but a pretty rose in full bloom may be nice
because this winter wonderland
is nothing right now but ice!!
Im wrapping up in my blanket
and pulling the pillow over my head
and say a little prayer that this house
doesnt blow away instead!
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lonesomerose
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2004-02-04 03:40:13]
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Re: Frozen in the snow
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by Menelaus on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 03:46:32 AM AEST
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| Great write. Liked the wit in it I'd say. |
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Re: Frozen in the snow
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 03:50:38 AM AEST
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ohhhhhhhhhhh rosey posey please dont get blown away.LOL this is wayyyyyyy to cute but I dont envy you,sorry Im not missing the snow and cold that much pack it up and head for the desert!! its raining here tonight........
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Re: Frozen in the snow
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:18:10 AM AEST
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Oh me, I certainly don't envy u none and I pray u don't loose your utilities. Thank god we don't have snow or ice yet anyways. It's been raining of-n-on every day or so but so far when it's rained it's been too warm to freeze.
stay warm.-n-safe.
luv, huggs,
emy
Very good write. Luv your attitude.
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Re: Frozen in the snow
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:42:51 PM AEST
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Nice little gem well written.
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Re: Frozen in the snow
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 06:52:55 PM AEST
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| i think this is adorable, im snowed in up here on this mountain, i love snow, (good thing lol) love the oz mention, i was thinking that the other night it was so windy, lol, maybe its kinda hard but i bet you have another poem inside you whilst your sitting in that cozy blanket:) *go breathe the fresh crisp air* hugs n' love nessa |
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