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Enter The Demon
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:54:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Look at you; you think you're
Superior.
A fence of gaping gashes on my arm
Scream on what you've done
My mind is now the safest place to die
A black hole stains the floor
Because you broke me in half.
You hurt me, you made me
vulnerable
I grip my pain in my fingertip
because you taught me.
Now I'm my own death warrant
I'll never stop despising you
I'd set fire to your grave if I could
Snap your limbs like ice if I could
I'd scream you deaf if I could
Paint a rose of destruction if I could
Because you hurt me.
Look at me; you think I'm
Inferior.
I huddle in the corner
when you shatter me.
I lie facedown on the floor
when you step on my back
And when I try to get back up
You push me down again
and laugh like it's a game.
You keep affliction on
the go in my veins
Because you'd love
to kill me.
And now I bear no mercy
Because no one helped me stay awake
I'd spill your blood to bathe if I could
Slash your heart into confetti if I could
Scratch your sight into blindness if I could
I'd bury you deep if I could
Because you destroyed me.
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Avarice_Riot
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2004-02-04 00:54:14]
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by SweetNess8003 on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:05:16 AM AEST
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| i think this is a very well written poem. My heart goes out to all of those who are pushed around by those who think violence is fun and a game. You expressed emotions very nicely. |
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:17:32 AM AEST
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U vent well!
I don't pretend 2 understand u so I want but it concerns me that your life doesn't mean more 2 u. I'm not trying 2 b judge mental so please don't think that.
What botheres me is that u r hurting very badly from some one else....
I'm so sorry to see that u think someone else dead or alive is responsible for your condition..........Right now where u r u can take charge your heart-n-soul again.......don't let evil cheat u from a life that even in the pitts of hell here on Earth is worth living.......When u finally realize that u can make or break yourself your inner healing will come......trust me I had 2 wade thru the cesspools of life to find me. No one is any better than the other in life. We are equal! Once u feel your own self worth then u have the key. Ur a brilliant writer! Your talent is amazing 'cause u wrote this one like a pro.
hugg, luv,
emy
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:28:29 AM AEST
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| I felt all the anger from the poem. I too can't stand people who put others down. The depth of your anger is intense. |
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by winged on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 09:39:17 AM AEST
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| Your poem is very well writen and you are able to express your sentiments very well. Thank you |
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by jkpunk13 on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 09:11:42 AM AEST
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| f****** awsome |
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:29:14 AM AEST
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Well, you can break people with your words! And that's just a start (I hope). Kick their a****, girl!
Hur |
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Re: Enter The Demon
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:13:41 AM AEST
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Bullies are BIG empty holes inside. This is a powerful write. Check out my "demon" for another take on what demons can do to us.
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