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When I’m With You
Contributed by
Tichawangana
on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:49:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I feel your emotions
making love with mine
in a wave of calm
that holds within it
the multiple orgasms
of deeply connected souls...
in a volcano of feeling
that erupts within me
and merges with the magma
from your eruptions
I feel our thoughts
throwing their arms
around each other
in compassionate embraces
that lock out our pain
I feel my vibes
in a padlocked connection
with yours
whose key we threw away
and will never need to find
I feel I’ve come home
my soul has found
it’s resting place
and despite
everything around us
despite the questions
and problems-
I feel- in a way
we yet do not know
everything has been made alright.
Copyright ©
Tichawangana
... [
2004-02-04 00:49:28]
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Re: When I’m With You
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:14:11 AM AEST
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Well Tichawangana,that was a beautiful love poem,I liked the last verse.But my favorite thing about your poem was the first stanza...Everything about it fit perfectly and I enjoyed reading.Keep posting,
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Re: When I’m With You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:21:03 AM AEST
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Very intense vivd write!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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