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Chocolate
Contributed by
nexxa
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:38:28 PM in AEST
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Smooth, silky, melting on my tongue like a dewdrop rolling off a petal.
Bringing ecstasy to my heart and mind with a simple swallow.
Adding roundness where I cringe, as a habit begins to binge.
Puckering spots begin to form and resentment becomes the scorn.
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nexxa
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2004-02-03 23:38:28]
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Re: Chocolate
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 05:32:09 AM AEST
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| I couldn't help but make a little grin when I read the 3rd line. Nice work. |
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Re: Chocolate
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:49:57 PM AEST
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~:*sweet*:~ write! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Chocolate
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:09:43 PM AEST
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But isn't it one of the five basic food groups needed daily? You know the five . . .
chocolate
comfort
calories
carbs
cravings
LOL, it is in my life, anyway.
Rita |
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