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on capturing breezes...
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:24:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
if there were a way to capture breezes,
i would take it not; yet breathe of its air deeply,
you are a warm breath of spring upon my soul,
i do not own you; nor ever would i want to,
our time together more precious than any gold,
brilliant moments filled with happy laughter,
kaleidoscope of many faceted colours, are you,
everytime when you smile i feel more alive,
each day we share is a gift of rare beauty,
hours with you fly by as an eagle in the sky,
times real shared tears ever followed by hugs,
heartfelt love goes your way from me mightily,
my humbled heart grateful you are in my life,
you are more dear to me upon each waking day,
oh to you, what could i possibly give in return?
only my promise of devoted loving friendship,
you mean more to me than you may ever know,
so if there were a way to capture breezes...
oh dearest friend,
i would have to decline.
~*~
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2004-02-03 21:24:00]
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:48:48 PM AEST
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Hi ladyfawn,
once again you have done it you are a gift to the world of poetry
this is a beautiful write.full with original thinking and feeling. |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by AsrealTheFallen10 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:17:17 PM AEST
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I agree, this is an absolutely beautiful poem.
And you did really good on the title, I’m sorry to say I skip over some poems because I just don’t think they sound intriguing but yours pulled me in and I wasn’t disappointed great write. |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:18:16 PM AEST
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Such incredible beauty.......sighs...I think a dozen roses are in order for this one. :o)
Larry
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:30:13 PM AEST
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beautifully and eloquently said...very good write
Shari |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:35:18 PM AEST
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Oh, absolutely breathtaking. Beautiful poem.
~blueheart |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:14:03 AM AEST
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:08:38 AM AEST
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| I'll give you a dozen more roses! I love this Nessa ... what a gorgeous idea - on capturing breezes ... and how you ended it - so divine ... this is a beauty ... Jan |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 04:25:33 PM AEST
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So much magic in this write!
U go girl u r soaring now.
a magical masterpeice!
hugs, luv,
emy |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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Breathtaking words, I can almost feel the breeze, wonderful.
The Phantom |
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Re: on capturing breezes...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:28:24 PM AEST
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Holy crap nessa, this is amazing!! LOL there's simply no other way to say it. The way it's written is just gorgeous, it's so utterly beautiful... it's so Shakespeare-esque. I'm so jealous!!! LOL This is incredible, I think it may be my personal favourite of yours. Once again... holy crap! :D
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