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Whatever
Contributed by
remy
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:59:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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well do you want to fight now?
we could do it right now
i'm not caught up in arms
but i wouldn't mind alarming you
well should i turn my back now?
ride through another track now
and you know and i know
there's places that i could go to
well suppose this: now i'm gone
you don't have to even come along
well i'm going
don't watch me go...
now what are you looking for?
don't pick apart my door
you know i'll let you in again
it's not so easy being friends
making trails hasn't been enough
should you examine my stuff?
i'd stuff it to you even when
i know it wouldn't make ammends
hey you know it: i've come far
going further won't break us apart
but i'm going
please don't, don't...
don't watch me go
it's hard for me, on my end
not what you'd expect, oh well
that's the best i can call you friend
well do you want to fight now?
let's do it right now
i'm caught up in my arms
carrying arms meant for you...
well suppose this: now i'm gone
you don't have to even come along
now i'm going
hey now you won't...
you won't let me go
it's hard for me, to pretend
that i want to go, well oh well
let's end the banter, make ammends
drop the ammunition...
truce or dare, whatever
i'll give up my arms...
well whatever
whatever.
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-02-03 19:59:58]
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Re: Whatever
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by Letting_Go on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:08:40 PM AEST
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| This was, this was well breath taking. Absolutely breath taking. Brilliant piece of poetry here. Wow what can I say, I can truly take this in because I know what you are talking about. Been there, still may be there. The word whatever gives me a feeling of sadness here. I thought this was abosuletly amazing. Thanks to you for making me feel today. |
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Re: Whatever
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:11:35 PM AEST
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wow...you've definitely got creative juices flowing lately... this is REALLY good! ;)
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Re: Whatever
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:14:23 AM AEST
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Very creative write.
luv the last stanza.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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