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Forgiveness
Contributed by
booboo
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:58:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Even though you left
I feel like i left
i always loved you
it's not like how it use to be
It's sad
to be me
i know i've done wrong
but you're strong
and hopefully
you're full of
forgiveness
hey dad
i'm not writing to you
to tell you that i hate you
i just wanna know
where you've been?
how you doing?
and if you could ever
foregive me?
It' sad
to be me
i know i've done wrong
but you're strong
Please foregive me
forgiveness is hard
when you're always depressed
But now i insist
you will some day
foregive me
cuz i still love you!
Copyright ©
booboo
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2004-02-03 19:58:38]
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Re: Forgiveness
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 08:05:48 PM AEST
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this reminds of me of that song "where is the love" for some particular reason... patience may be your goal for the time being thou. good write!
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Re: Forgiveness
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by Niceguysfinishlast on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 08:36:28 PM AEST
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I like how you are selfless and are willing to forgive. Good luck
Jon |
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