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Would It.
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:19:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If the stars could talk what would they say,
Would they whisper sweet nothings, or join us and pray,
Would they shine bright, or fade outta sight,
Would they shoot across the night sky, or break down and cry,
If the sun could understand our love, what would it feel,
Would it burn with desire, could it tell this is real,
Would it swell with pride each time we passed by,
Would it light up the room and cause the roses to bloom,
If the roses could see, what would they think,
Would they release their perfume and help me sweep you off your feet,
Would they bow, knowing that true love has graced their humble ground,
Would they dance out of the sand, falling for this woman so adored by her man,
If the clouds could hear, do you think they would understand,
Would they assist me in building your dreams with my bare hands,
Would they part and and show us a wonderful sky of blue,
Would they empty their souls, allowing us to see a rainbow?
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Would It.
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:24:53 PM AEST
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Smashing write!
Your imagination can go wild with all the "what ifs" in this one....
Well done Phantom
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Would It.
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 08:45:33 PM AEST
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| ohh this is great matt, very sweet and written by your loving heart for your sweetie, i bet shes grinning! i love how you did the clouds, 'emptying their souls so you may see rainbows, even, wow:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Would It.
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:58:28 AM AEST
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| Just a masterpiece ..your love shines in eah word of this poem..great work. venkat |
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Re: Would It.
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:15:18 AM AEST
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| Your poetry is just getting better and better ... I love every line ... so filled with love and devotion - could almost see you smiling as you wrote it ... Jan |
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