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eternal
Contributed by
stitches
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:39:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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molded pain
as i descend
into darkness
blinded by tears eternal
tomorrows doubt
todays regret
Left behind
it's all a lie
and the lord...
has fallen
another ghost of the past
the delusions
are fading
now is the dawn of dreams
but the dauntless waves
as daylight screams its death
force me under
my lungs gasping
there is Nothing
but the pulsing tranquility
as the poison
enters my veins
detatch myself
from the program at hand
crystallized
my withering Soul
enters the realm of shadows
the fatal kiss of time
has matched the tempest within
"I know I'm the one that brought it down"
Copyright ©
stitches
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2004-02-03 18:39:46]
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Re: eternal
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by myz3r0 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:59:09 PM AEST
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Very nice, it's very nicely written in my opinion.
It sounds a bit like a suicide poem, but if that was the point you are trying to get across then its ok. Either way it's very nice. |
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Re: eternal
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by stitches on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:15:07 PM AEST
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| not a suicide scrawl, just the way i feel sometimes, thank you though |
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